Sunday, January 16, 2011

+ 1.15: Imprisonment

Some time had passed between Beau and Davrin’s clash.
The last thing Davrin remembered was his face connected to the floor of his library and Jeeves calling after him before he was thrown inside the back of a 4x4. His head crashed against the hard un-upholstered floor and he slipped out of consciousness. Now he was awake, perched on a pedestal, his body aching all over. He let out a low moan of agony and leaned against the wall.  
The room he was in was badly lit. There was only a wall torch and a small window high up above his reach. He strained his eyes and looked around. There was only a coffin, a toilet, a basin and a cheap shower.  
He heard the footsteps of a woman draw closer toward him, the door creaked as Elvira stepped inside.
“Did the girl put you up to this? Did she run to you and beg you to lock me up?” He spat viciously. He was already thinking of ways to dish out her punishment. Elvira remained calm.
“No. The girl doesn’t know anything. This was our back up plan should you not see reason. And you didn’t. So for the rest of your days you will eke out your existence here. You will be subjected to the same treatment you gave the girl.” 
“All’s fair in love and lust.” He heard Beau chime in. He gave Elvira a knowing look and she nodded in reply. Before he knew it Elvira shoved a giant capsule in down his throat. Davrin stared at the two incredulously willing himself to lunge at them and escape. But his feet felt heavy and his bones rigid. “It will wear off soon.” He heard Elvira say before she locked the door and left. He was done for; left to wither away in this dungeon. Karma’s such a b***h!

7 comments:

  1. Great twist. I loved it. Hurry with the next update. I see you're a fellow ZA. I'm so glad to meet someone from here. My friends always look at me weird when I mention Sims and gaming; they don't even know I write sims stories, so finding a fellow South African is amazing!

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  2. Oh, what is going to happen next???
    Can't wait to read it. Your story is getting better and better :)

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  3. I have a basic idea for the next update. I just hope you guys won't be too disappointed with it. It's not going to be action-packed like the last three.

    @Val: I know exactly how you feel! My friends are always asking me why I play sims as much as I do. They would know if they gave it a try I think. I'm also so glad to meet a fellow South African :D I never thought that I'd find anyone from here.

    @Dutchy: Thank you :) And thanks for reading.

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  4. @Val: I tried to register on DD but for some reason the Capthca (spelling?) isn't working. I can't see the text/image. O_o something must be wrong with my java script. Do you know of some way to work around it?

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  5. He is certainly getting what he deserved but I am a little concerned about Troye, did the vampires take him?

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  6. Trish, no idea why it's doing that. Maybe there was a problem with the site or the browser. Please try it again?

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  7. @Seaweedy: He is indeed. As for Troye you'll have to wait for the next lot of chapters which have been written and are waiting to be posted :)
    Btw I caught up on notorious :| Sigismund is an evil evil man.

    @Val: I think it's the browser too. I'll try again from mozilla. Hopefully I'll have better luck.
    I'm almost done with Krisis. Well actually just read up to forgiveness. Poor Tamsyn is damaged goods. I kind of feel sorry for her. But I'll post the rest of my comments on your blog.

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